I’m revising a story right now.  One of the questions I get asked when I talk to community groups and schools is how writers can best rewrite their work. Here are a few suggestions that have helped me. 

1.  Put your writing away for awhile.  If you’re too close to it . . . you may love your words too much . . . so you will struggle.  Time is your friend!  Later you’ll see  where you can strengthen your story.

2.  Where are you TELLING instead of SHOWING? 

Does it sound like ANY character is reacting to the situation?  Instead, how would THIS SPECIFIC character react?  Give THIS character a unique personality.

3.  Active verbs will let your story move along instead of zzzzzz…….draaaagging. 

4.  If you have a few people read your story and they all give you the same suggestion, give it a try.  What do you have to lose? 

5.  Read your piece out loud.  My dog is used to me now . . . When SHE yawns, I know I’m in trouble.

6.  Having trouble getting motivated?  Read good writing to WRITE good writing.

BEST JUVENILE
The Postcard by Tony Abbott (Little, Brown Books for Young Readers)

BEST YOUNG ADULT
Paper Towns by John Green
Penguin Young Readers Group – Dutton Children’s Books)

I haven’t read either of these books yet, but good news. Our Contra Costa Public Library System has them BOTH! I just put in requests. (Do you know about his cool service they have? When they come in, they notify you.) http://ccclib.org/

Ever hear of the old-fashioned tradition of pen pals?  My mother had one as a girl  in Minnesota in the early 1930s.  She wrote to her England friend through the depression, during World War II as she worked a job as a book-keeper that later requried SIX men to replace her (she received one-third of ONE man’s salary) and up until her 82nd year  . . . when she passed away.  Seventy years of friendship through hand-written letters, Christmas gifts, and even one tape recording of our family’s voices.

Today I treasure a hand-written letter in the mail from a friend or relative.  When was the last time you received one?  Wrote one?   It takes more thought and time than a dashed off e-mail and a push of the send button. 

Writing prompts:  1.  Write a note to a friend telling her/him of an experience you remember you’ve done together.  What was enjoyable about it?  Fun, funny, sad, memorable? 

2.  Write a letter to someone who hurt you recently. You don’t need to send it.  Say what’s in your heart.  Don’t speak of revenge and hate, but of the hurt in your soul.   Let it “sit” for several days and then revisit it.  Perhaps it can be used to mend your feelings or the relationship. 

3.  Write a letter from that person to YOU.  What would they say to you?

4.  Write a dialogue in the perfect world between the two of you.

5.  Write a letter to a character in a novel you have read.  What would you like to say to this person?

6.  Write a letter from one character in a novel of one book to another character in another book.  (Thanks to the College High School teacher’s student’s great idea!)

Are there any other contests that you hold? Are there any contests for high school students?   Diana

Although our California Writers Club only holds a middle school writing contest at this time due to our funding constraints, the Mt. Diablo Peace Center has a yearly art and writing contest for middle school AND high school students.http://www.mtdpc.org/

As I continue to find more contests, I will post them here. 

I’ve also known people to win the Willamette  Writers Conference has the Kay Snow Awards in Oregon. http://www.willamettewriters.com/1/kaysnow.php  It is yearly too.   Also available for high school students.  I encourage teachers and students to look at the pages at the right for writer suggestions.  They have been formulated by over the years as to how judges find the best manuscripts possible. 

Send your thoughts and questions about writing here.  And when I find writing workshops, I’ll post them too.