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About Writer’s Block & Procrastination

On Saturday at our local writer’s club, author Sophie Littlefield (A BAD DAY FOR SORRY, A BAD DAY FOR PRETTY) spoke to us about actually getting down to writing.  What holds you back?  Do you procrastinate? 

Actually, we don’t know any writer who DOESN’T procrastinate . . .

If you’re confident, it’s easy.  You won’t procrastinate.   Fear makes us put off the hard stuff. 

Sophie suggests giving ourselves concrete goals.  Write ____ words a day.  Read _____ words a day.  Sit there 45 minutes and write.  Even if you can’t write, STILL sit there for 45 minutes!  Then you can take 15 minutes off. 

What are your best tips for making yourself do what Jane Yolen calls BIC?  (Butt in chair) 

A few things that have worked for me: 

1. Turn on answering machine

2.  Turn off Internet.

3.  Reward yourself after completing a chapter or a goal in your writing.  (Okay.  Yes.  I admit it.  Sometimes it’s chocolate for me.)

4.  If I’m blocked, it always helps to read a little first.  It may be something inspirational. 

5.  If you are spiritual, say a prayer or meditate.  Or daydream a bit.  The trick is to relax and go with the flow and LET GO. 

I’d go on with this list, but I think I’ll do it later . . .

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How to Finish Your Story

So you’ve finished a first draft of your short story and you think, “What now?”  Or you are in the middle of it and you wonder, “Should I stop and look this over first?”

1. No.  Keep on writing.  No stopping if you can help it.  The biggest mistake people make when they’re writing a short story or novel is stopping after the first chapter or first half and then changing their minds.  If you do this, you’ll never finish your story.  Finish the rough draft first, knowing that a rough draft is supposed to be ROUGH.  It can be lousy!  Give yourself permission!  Just get the story out.  Don’t worry about spelling, punctuation, how messy it is, or if you’ve got a part of the plot you forgot to “tie up.”  You can go back later and fix it. 

2.  So you have your complete rough draft.  Read it out loud.  Yes.  No matter how silly you feel.  I read aloud to my dog all the time.   Tell your parents or your significant other that you aren’t crazy, you’re just a writer.  (In some circles, being a writer IS crazy, but more on that another time . . .)  Read your writing out loud to see when your story puts you to zzzzz.  Hold a highlighter or pen in your hand so you can mark these places. 

Chances are, you were “telling”/ narrating too much in those zzzzzz moments.  If you were, take out the telling and create a scene.  What’s a scene?  It’s a moment where you plop the reader into the action of the story.    Use dialogue, thoughts, and feelings of the main character.  Slow-down-the-moment for the important stuff.   Put in a specific detail or two to make us SEE and FEEL like we’re really there. 

Now read it out loud.  Isn’t it better?    Make sure you didn’t just write it to write it.  The scene must have a reason to be there.   Hopefully it moves your character closer or farther away from his/her goal.  Every scene should have some conflict/ problem. 

If what I’m writing scares you, just ignore the advice and write your story.  At the end of your story, if you know what your character wants more than anything, and you’ve shown this desire in your story, and it’s interesting/suspenseful, you’ve done your job.  Pat yourself on the back.  Reward yourself.  Take a break. 

Then write another story.  It feels great to produce, doesn’t it?

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