We’re back from several days in Oregon.  In Portland my husband allowed me much time in Powell’s Books.  If it were a one-story building, it would equal eight blocks of books!

If you are a  book-lover as I am, you will not be disappointed.  I spent hours browsing used books, reading, and selecting my favorites.  It was great seeing all of the other readers, too, many of them children, focused into books so much that they weren’t aware of their surroundings. 

Yes, some parents and teachers, and writers ARE doing a great job after all!  Keep it up!

Note:  If  you are a parent, make sure you take your child to bookstores and libraries often.  When in doubt allow them books for their library rather than useless stuff. 

Note:  If you are a teacher, “talk up” bookstores and libraries and mention them in your casual speech to show you value them.  You’ll be surprised how much they want to be like you, although they might not ever want to admit it.

Note:  If you are a student, give your parents – – and your friends,  reasons why you need books.  Show them you value them.   They can use your influence too!  Sometimes adults get away from reading and need to be led back to it.

We also visited Newport, on the coast, and stayed at the Sylvia Beach Hotel.  It’s a little bed and breakfast where each room is named and themed for an author. 

We stayed in the Agatha Christie room, where there were clues for her mysteries scattered about.   An old-fashioned typewriter,  English-style prints on the walls, a cozy cat named Dickens (yes, he was real!) and picture windows facing the ocean decorated our place.

My favorite room was the Dr. Seuss room.  Done in bold primary colors, the bed had big furry feet sticking out of the foot-board!  Also in the room stood a lovely artist’s sketch table , a painting of Cat-in-the-Hat on the wall, and stuffed characters from his books.  What fun! 

In the evening, we ate downstairs at their Table of Contents  restaurant. The evening featured family style dining with other people gathered at the tables and a fun game of us telling two truths and one lie, in order for everyone to question each other to discover the REAL truth and lie.  It was a great way to get the conversation going, although at our table, we had no trouble at all. The food was delicious and we had a delightful time, followed by  reading back in our room. 

Although it rained every day but one – – the day of Portland’s famed Rose Parade, which happened right outside our hotel, we still enjoyed our trip. 

Funny about the parade.  We had no knowledge about this at all.  It reminded us of when we visited Belgium a couple of years ago.  Then, too, our hotel was right next to their annual parade.  Theirs was themed for recycling and it had gone on for years and years, before recycling was cool! 

Makes me want to write about parades. . . I have a few from my childhood that give me warm memories. 

What about you? 

Writing Prompt:  1.  Write about a parade in a personal narrative. 

2.  Write about a trip you’ve taken or want to take.   3.  Write about a character in your story who takes a trip.

In my dream a few nights ago, I see my mother in heaven.   She has long, flowing black hair.  Her hair was never this long when she was alive. 

“Hi Mom!” I say.  She greets me too, but she is busy pushing my aunt in a wheelchair so she keeps walking.

“Wait!” I say.  “I don’t seem to communicate very well with you any more here in heaven.  It’s not like it used to be.  What am I doing wrong?”

She pauses and looks me in my eyes.  “Stop trying so hard.”

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This is good advice.  Not only for me connecting with her in my dream, but for anyone with their writing.  When we try too hard to create art, the art is forced and is anything but creative and natural. 

We must relax and let it flow!   How do we do this?  Daydream!  While you are letting ideas, words, and images float by you, write them down casually.  Know you are brainstorming. 

Sit in an easy chair, or lie in the sun.  Where are YOU most relaxed?

When the words feel stilted or you are in a funk, remember my mother’s words.  Go to the place in your head where you are able to relax the best.  Go to the physical place you are able to be restful. 

And create.

As I wrote on the computer in my office, a squirrel on the deck rail outside my window chattered, squealed, hopped up and down, and made a scooping motion with his paw underneath the railing.  What was going on below?  I stood up for a better view. 

Beneath the squirrel on the deck floor lay Zoie, my thirteen-year-old Yorkshire Terrier.  Sunning herself, apparently unaware of the squirrel and his antics above, Zoie’s eyelids were halfway closed, in peaceful relaxation. 

 Oh, poor Zoie.  She was more deaf and blind that we had realized.  She was taking no notice whatsoever of the commotion above her. 

 Later, I told my husband of what happened and he sympathized with our dog. 

However, the next day Zoie’s actions clued me in to her unique relationship with this squirrel.  

 Again, I noticed the squirrel back at his post, ranting as though a predator was stealing his nest.  Again, I stood up.  But this time, Zoie faced him, a few feet away.  She didn’t move a whisker.  She stared nearly at him – – but averted her eyes just enough to make him aware he wasn’t her focus. 

 And she was smiling.

 Good girl.  Very good girl. 

Writing Prompt:  Animals are smarter than we think they are. 

1.  Write about an animal and his/her relationship with another animal.  Show through their actions their feelings. 

2.  Write about an animal you have known and what you’ve learned from this relationship. 

3.  Use an animal relationship to inspire art, poetry, or a story that features animal communication.

 

It started like any other day.   But instead of writing, I had to run a few errands first.  The grocery store was number one.  Grabbing my purse, I noticed a stack of small checks on top of the checkbook.  The bank was right next to Safeway.  My hand froze in midair over the bank book.

“No.  Don’t go.”  The words echoed in my mind from who knows where. I felt a darkness wash over me. 

Ridiculous.  Must be because I was anxious about getting all of my work done before the writer contest banquet.

I grabbed the checks.  My body shuddered.  What was this feeling?  I tried to identify it.  Something bad was going to happen.  I didn’t have this feeling often, but when I did, I tried to heed it. 

But then again, this was silly.  However, I let myself be silly.  After all, I could hold off and do the banking on the weekend.  I left the checkbook there. 

Later, after grabbing the milk and vegies and hopping into the car, I saw a police car whip into the parking lot, with lights flashing, sirens off.  My heart thumped.  I knew why he was there.  The bank was being robbed at that very moment. 

The next day, the newspaper confirmed it.  Later that week when I did visit the bank, I asked the teller how she was.  It was her turn to shudder. 

“He was mean,” she said.  “He was all dressed in black.  And big.  Very big.  He wore a gas mask and flashed his gun around.  We knew he would use it.  One of the customers was so upset she had to go to her priest afterwards.”

The bank robber got away, unfortunately.  He is suspected of other bank robberies in the area too. 

I’m glad that I paid attention to my intuition that Monday morning.  I saved myself some emotional trauma. 

Writing Prompt:  Have you ever experienced a moment of intuition?  Did you listen to it?  Or wished you had?  Choose one or more of these experiences to inspire an essay, short story, or poem.

This past Saturday we honored all of the first, second and third place winners of the California Writers Club Mt. Diablo Branch’s Young Writers Contest at a banquet in Pleasant Hill.   A one-time award of Best of the Best was given to Gabriel Ostler for his short story, The Thin Line.

Meeting all of these talented kids and their families and teachers was exciting and inspiring!  After I read portions of all of their writing aloud, many members of our writing club approached me later to express their amazement at the high quality of writing. 

“Wow!  These students are so sophisticated!” said one author.  “I never wrote like that as a child.”

“Can you imagine how good they will be as adults?” said another.

I echo their sentiments.  As they grow older, if they keep writing and honing their craft and read everything they can, the new generation of California writers will be even more amazing.  We will be entertained and educated by these gems.  We look forward to your future publications. 

Congratulations winners!

Pop Quiz

1.  Where were there 155 people gathered together to celebrate young writers?

2.  Which young writer won the BEST OF THE BEST award, which was a secret until it was announced?

3.  Which story did Chronicle Books Editor Melissa Manlove share with the group?

4.  How many kids won prizes for the quiz based on the students’ winning work?

5.   What secret tip did Liz reveal about three entries of the contest that were postmarked April 12th?

Answers: 

1.  Zio Fraedo’s Restaurant in Pleasant Hill

2.  Gabriel Ostler won for his short story, The Thin Line.

3.   WHERE THE WILD THINGS ARE by Maurice Sendak

4.  Three students all one first place in the quiz. 

5.   Three entries were delivered to the California Writers Club Young Writers Contest weeks after the April 12th deadline.  The contest had already been judged by this time.  Each entry was stamped April 12th by the post office.  Moral of the story?  Next year, make sure and send in your entries WEEKS EARLY!

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Apology from Liz!  I’ve corrected the placements in the awards.  My phone calls to the students were accurate.  Upon going over my list to make sure I had names spelled correctly, I saw I flipped a second and third place around in the 8th grade short story category.  It is now updated and correct.  Next year, perhaps I should carefully check them FIRST before placing them on this blog too quickly.  Gee, perhaps I should take my own writing advice?  You think?

If you entered our contest but your name isn’t up here, you may have won an honorable mention.  Everyone will hear from us within the next month.  And if you didn’t win, it just means that at this moment in time, the judges chose another piece other than yours.  That is ALL that it means. 

All published authors have entered their manuscripts into contests or tried to get their books published and their manuscripts have not been chosen at one time or another.  What do they do?  They try again.  They keep writing. 

Some students who entered this year and won, have entered this contest in previous years and came close to winning, but didn’t carry away a prize.  However, they kept writing and entering, and now they’ve succeeded. 

If you are a sixth or seventh grade student, please enter again.  You may start writing your next year’s entries now!  If you are an 8th grade student, there are other contests you can enter.  I post them here on this blog when I find them.  And you 6th and 7th graders, keep entering other contests too.

You can ask for advice on how to make your stories, essays and poems  better.  Write your questions here.  Attend writing workshops to help you.  Ask your teacher for advice.  Start a writing critique group with your friends.  Each of these ways will help improve you writing craft. 

College teachers tell me that the most sought-after students are the ONES WHO ARE GOOD WRITERS.  Believe it or not, this is the skill that many kids lack.    Employers also are thrilled when their employees can write.   (Many adults really can’t write well, even if they are wizards in math, science or other subjects.) 

So congratulations to everyone who has participated in this contest.  Writing itself is a risk.  You put your soul on paper!  And it’s not easy, either, is it?  Thanks for entering.  Hope to see you at a workshop, our banquet, or another reading or writing event.  And hope to see you here, asking questions and giving advice about good books you read.    Liz